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Lady of Mischief (Extended Epilogue)

 

Sebastien ran across the garden, his laughter filled the air. His nursemaid, Grace, walked behind him, her hands clasped behind her. Surely, Lavinia thought, she was looking for a way to caution the boy. He kept on running and laughing.

She smiled as she looked at him. Her son. Her son with Colin. Sebastien had been born on a rainy day in Paris. Lavinia had been at an art collector’s home with Colin, where he had displayed his paintings. Her waters had broken there.

She smiled. It had been four years since they eloped from Somerset to Gretna Green. There, they had gotten a special license and gotten married, with Lord Fitzwilliam as their only witness. Although the Duke and Duchess had not been openly supportive, they had sent them a letter, congratulating them on their union. After that, Percy returned home, while they went away, to Paris, to begin a new life.

The last four years had been the best of her life. She had never been happier in all those years.

“Mother!” Sebastien said as he ran to her and hugged her. She giggled.

She was painting in the garden. Over the years, her love for painting had grown. Although she was not been as good as Colin, she was getting better.

She wished to paint her son, now, as he ran in the garden. She had gotten the inspiration on one of the days when she had seen him running around the manor.

“Go on, dear,” she said to her son.

Sebastien ran along.

She watched him and went about painting.

“He is just like you,” Colin said, coming up behind her, and kissing her on her cheek.

“My darling.” She giggled. She had not heard him come up behind her.

Colin stood by her. His hair was longer now, and she loved it. She turned and pulled it behind his ears and kissed his cheeks. “You are back early.”

He nodded. He raised a letter in the air and handed it to her. “From your mother.”

She smiled and opened the letter. Her mother wrote quite often to her now, and she was excited to receive them.

Dear Lavinia,

I hope this letter finds you well, my dear. I write to you with a heavy heart. My heart is full of sorrow and burden. A few months ago, Charles fell ill. He had been getting better, but it worsened all of a sudden. I fear the worst, and so does he. And for this, he has requested that you all come home.

My regards to Colin and my little darling, Sebastien. I hope to see you soon.

Yours Faithfully,

Augusta, Duchess of Somerset

Lavinia felt cold as she lowered the letter. Colin was no longer beside her. He was now with Sebastien by the waterfall. Her heart broke as she watched him. She wondered how she would break the news to him. They had never even known that the Duke had been ill.

Colin frowned when he saw her. He whispered to Sebastien and made his way over to her, while their son played.

“What happened? What did the letter say?” He tried to take it from her but she shook her head.

“Your father is very ill. He wishes to see us,” she said. Her eyes glistened.

He creased his brows for a second, until it dawned on him. His eyes widened. “Ill?”

She nodded. “He has been ill for quite some time now it seems. We were not informed. Mother thought he would get better, but it has worsened.”

Colin closed his eyes and sighed. Lavinia pulled him in for a hug. He bowed his head and stayed still.

She rubbed his shoulders. He welcomed her touch, by resting his head on her shoulder and touching her hair.

He was not be close to his father, but he loved him nonetheless. Lavinia held him close. “Mother has asked that we return home. Your Father wishes it.”

“He thinks that he may not make it?”

Lavinia shook her head. “We must not think in such a way.”

He blew out a breath. His once happy expression was now gloomy. “We must prepare to go to England right away.”

Lavinia’s heart was heavy. She hoped in her heart, that this was a storm that would eventually pass. Hope grew inside her. The Duke would survive this.

 

 


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      • I wanted more of the extended epilogue it ended rather abruptly. I did enjoy the story and the characters were excellent.

        • Dear Judy, I am so glad that you enjoyed my novel and you liked the characters so much! I am sorry that you didn’t enjoy the extended epilogue. Next time I will try to give you a bigger glance of the character’s new life 😉

  • Lovely story. I was surprised that step-siblings were judged when it was common practice to marry cousins. I was happy for their marriage.

    • Dear Vanassia, thank you for reading my book! I am sorry that you think this ended abruptly. I will keep your feedback on my mind not to do the same mistake again in the future!

  • What a strange extended epilogue – why did you bother to write it at all? Surely you do not need feedback from your readers to know this was poorly done.

    • Dear Carol, I am sorry that you didn’t enjoy the extended epilogue. Next time I will try to give you a bigger glance of the character’s new life 😉

      • Dear Diana, thanks for your honest feedback. I am sorry that you feel this way about the ending, but I hope that you will enjoy the sequel! This is all I can say for now ❤️

  • Enjoyed reading this book until I got to the end of it along with the Extended Epilogue. The plot twist at the end seemed like a letdown as did the Extend Epilogue. They both seemed like you wanted to end the story but didn’t exactly know how to do it. Wish Extended Epilogue closed all the loops. I’m glad Lavinia and Colin got their HEA. Don’t think I’d recommend this to my friends unless I gave them a caveat about the disappointing ending.

    • Dear Dorothy, Thank you for your honest feedback! I will keep that on my mind and try to avoid the same mistake in the future. Your critique helps me become a better writer!

  • Loved the story but the extended story ended without a true ending. Left you wondering what happened when they returned home.

    • Dear Nettie, I am sorry if you feel this way about the extended epilogue! I will do my best to avoid the same mistake in the future!

  • Cliff hangers have become very common in the last 20 years since we are seeing more books in series. Sometimes it helps to identify a book as part of a series so an ending that leaves a reader with questions offers a heads up, that there will be more coming. A light romantic tale, that might profit from a bit more of the mystery, flesh out the real villain a little more. The story behind Colin and Lavinia took over the book. The premise was good and I enjoyed the storyline.

  • Are you planning on writing another book about Lavinia and Colin if not why would you leave us hanging like that? It would have been better to have just not written an extended epilogue. It makes no sense to end a story that is not an end. This is not up to your usual writing.
    Did you forget to finish it???

    • Dear Ginger, thanks for your feedback. This book will have a sequel …I am sorry if you felt that you didn’t get a proper closure to this book. I will take your comment into consideration! 🙂

  • I have been binging on your books and have enjoyed them all. I only have have 1critique, the editing. I read 1 or 2 books a day so I am going through them pretty quick. I can’t wait for the sequel to this one. How an I find out when it will be released.
    P.s. If you ever need any help on your editing team I would love to help you.
    Keep up with the great story lines.😊

    • Thank you so much for your comment dear Margaret! You can subscribe to my mail list and then you will receive emails with all of my releases! 🙂 I will take your comment about the editing into consideration. Thanks for the support 😍

  • You may have well ignored the extended epilogue. We knew that Colin would need to return to England when the father died. I don’t understand your intent, unless it is the beginning of a new story.

  • Was not thrilled about the extended epilogue. However it you have a sequel for this book. I just may read it. Thanks you please try to give more details on ending. Will buy your book did enjoy the other two I purchased.

    • Dear Yvonne, this sequel is not yet published. It is on my schedule, however! I will make sure to contact you again in the future when this book is out! 🙂

  • Loved the story of Colin and Lavinia. I was confused on the extended epilogue as to why her uncle that was supposed to be in jail was their only witness for their wedding.

    • I’m very pleased that you liked my story, dear Wanda! Your opinion is important to me, and I will take your comment into consideration!

  • Loved the story itself but the extended epilogue was a rather surprising ending…Is this because there’s to be a sequel ? If not it was a very confusing ending to the epilouge !!

    • I’m happy that you liked my story, dear Nora! Indeed, the extended epilogue has the purpose of preparing you for what is about to come, so stay tuned for more! 😉

  • I really loved this feel good book. Great seeing admiration budding into a great romance. Both characters came into their true self and to each other.

    • Thank you so much for your kind review, dear Mary! I’m glad you liked the characters of the story!❤️

  • A compelling love story between an unlikely couple. Now we must wait for the sequel to learn what happens to the duke and Colin assumes the dukedom.

  • What happened to this, it’s like stopping in the middle of a sentence. Why bother if this how you you end you story

    • Dear Bambie, I am sorry that you didn’t enjoy the extended epilogue. Next time I will try to give you a bigger glance at the character’s new life 😉

  • The EE left us hanging also lord Fitzwilliam was supposed to be in jail for attempted murder how did he go to Gretna Green. I read some of the other comments and it said you were doing a sequel but on what characters you never introduced any more characters I enjoyed the book a lot but the EE was very puzzling to say the least

    • Dear Mary, thank you for your comment and feedback! The truth is I had considered a sequel on this but life brought new ideas indstead…I might return some day, so that there are no questions left unanswered!

  • As others have said this extended epilogue was a disappointment after reading the book – which I really enjoyed as it was a bit different. Would you not have just been better telling us of the next book which follows this one. It would mean that people would buy the next book to read the follow on story

    • Hello Margaret, it truly saddens me to hear that! But thank you for your honest opinion! They make me a better writer! I will take everything you said into consideration for next time!

  • Why must we go thru such stupidity to read the WHOLE book each time??? What is the purpose of having to search for the true end of the book?

    • Hello my dear Sharon, thank you for your feedback! I am really sorry for the incovenience! I’ll let my team know!

  • I loved this book. My favorite characters were Lavinia and Colin. Lavinia because she found joy in animals and children. Collin because despite his father’s inability to rise above his grief due to the death of his wife, Colin’s Mom, he was a kind caring individual!!

    Thanks for writing this book and I look forward to reading more of your works!!!

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