Seducing the Sinful Duke (Extended Epilogue)
“Such a lovely ball, Helena. I am so proud of you,” said the Earl as he kissed Helena’s cheeks.
Happiness was too small a word to describe the elatedness inside Helena at that point in time. After weeks of planning for the fundraiser ball, it was finally being hosted. It was one of Helena’s many dreams and she was beginning to accomplish them one by one. Everyone she cared for were in attendance. Georgina, her husband, her brother, James and her parents were in attendance.
The past few weeks had been better than ever, although there were some trying moments, Helena had managed to persevere. Her brother had been imprisoned, she finally had been able to tell her father the truth about her brother.
The Earl had not taken the news well. He had broken down in tears upon hearing that his son had been poisoning him. It took time, but her father slowly accepted that Allan was irredeemable. He was consumed by hate that was built by pent up emotions for years. This was seen evidently when the Earl had gone to visit him. Helena had refused to go. But the Earl came home with more acceptance. Allan had refused to see him.
Helena sighed. It seemed like such a long year, but she was happy that the evil in their life was gone and now everyone could move on.
Helena looked around her. The ball was indeed a success. With Georgina’s advise and coaching, Helena was a good host. A lot of funds had been raised for the children at the local orphanage and more were being raised. Helena was happy that she would be able to help those children.
“I must retire early, my dear. I apologize that I cannot stay for long,” the Earl said.
Helena nodded. She did want him to go home. She had not even been in support of him coming. He was still recuperating. Her father was a lot better now, but he had begun to walk with a cane to support himself as he was not yet strong enough. Helena did not want anything that would make him have a relapse which was why after the Earl confessed that he was tired and wanted to go home, she insisted that he did.
“Yes. Yes. You must leave now, Father. Let me walk you outside,” Helena said.
The Earl smiled. “No. Do not leave your ball, my dear.”
“Tis nearly over.” She smiled.
“A good host must not leave, my dear. I shall find my way to my carriage.” He kissed her again and headed off. Helena’s smile did not fade as she watched her father walk away.
“I presume that a dance has been saved for me?” someone whispered by her. Helena looked to her side while her cheeks turned crimson. It was her husband. It seemed that he was no longer busy with helping her convince a few gentlemen to aid in raising funds.
Jeremy had been very supportive of Helena in all aspects. He had aided her in planning for the ball, insisting that the floorboards be cleaned and even helping her choose the perfect decorations. And when the fund raising was needed, he went about convincing a few gentlemen. Helena could not have asked for any other way to show love than through support. Jeremy had let her into his life and showered her with love in the past weeks. He kept no secrets from her anymore and was not abashed to share his pain with her. He even took her to his parent’s grave, where he had reconciled with his mother, after years of anger towards her. Helena had insisted that he let go and remember the important things about his mother — that she loved him regardless of whatever mistake she may have made.
Helena was happier than ever when she was with Jeremy. That was what love felt like. A life that had seemed so unreachable before was now the life she lived. It was truly amazing. And there was more. She had made a wonderful discovery that morning. She intended to share the news with her husband when they were alone. When the ball was over. She could not wait.
“I’m afraid I shan’t be able to dance with you, Your Grace, as I am already spoken for,” Helena teased, looking straight ahead.
Jeremy hummed, placing both his hands behind him. “Is that so? And who may this intended be.”
“You do not know him.”
“Oh, I suppose the only solution to this shall be to elope with you, Your Grace.”
They exchanged gazes when he said that and together, they chuckled. It was truly fascinating how Jeremy understood her with not much effort. He truly was her soul mate.
He let out his hand. “Dance with me, Helena.”
Helena blushed. She could never refuse such an offer. She placed her hand in his and together they walked across the ballroom, to the center and began to dance. Their hands intertwined and they moved together as though they were the only ones in the ballroom. Jeremy’s regard towards her was acute, so much that she could feel herself blushing.
“You are aware that I love you,” he whispered right before he twirled her.
“You tell me every day, my love,” she responded.
Jeremy pulled her back into his arms. “Because I always want you to know.”
The dance came to an end soon enough. Helena curtsied while Jeremy bowed. The crowd applauded them. The rest of the night went by rapidly. One moment, Helena was appreciating the guests for attending the ball and supporting the little children, and the next, people were leaving.
The night was long and fruitful. She had accomplished something. At least one dream of hers had become a reality. Her second would, soon enough. Jeremy had promised to send her writing to the theatre when he was done reading. She had brought it from Bellingham Estate a few days ago, after much pleading from Jeremy. He dedicated his time to reading it and he loved it.
“This must be acted out at the theatre, Helena. This is such a wonderful story,” he had said.
Helena was grateful for Jeremy, truly.
Later that night, when Jeremy and Helena retired to their bedchamber, Helena finally had the time to tell Jeremy about her discovery earlier in the day.
“I propose that you seat,” she insisted, giggling.
Jeremy narrowed his eyes at her but took a seat. “Helena, you frighten me. What is it you wish to share?”
Helena smiled. She could not wait for his reaction when she finally said what she had to say. She walked close to him and stood before him, between his legs. She rested her hands on his shoulders and looked into his eyes. She was unable to control her smile as she revealed to him. “I am with child.”
Everything paused. Jeremy’s eyes widened but he was stock-still. Helena’s heart pounded. She waited for him to say something. Anything. But instead of saying anything, Jeremy wrapped his arms around Helena’s waist and pulled her close to him. He bent his head and kissed her stomach through her cotton dress.
“My beautiful daughter,” he whispered.
Helena had not known that she had been holding her breath. She began to giggle uncontrollably as Jeremy kept kissing her stomach. He was just as thrilled as she was about the news. He looked up all of a sudden, his eyes bright and a grin directed at her.
“This is the happiest day of my life, my love.” He was full of glee.
Helena could not be in any better place. Jeremy was her home. And she knew that with this child she was to birth, she would make a good family with Jeremy. This was her greatest dream, to have a family of her own. One filled with love and high spirits. That dream was coming to pass. It was no secret that with Jeremy, she would achieve so much and more.
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Loved Jeremy and Helena’s story. I have read several of your books and can’t wait to get started on another one of your books!
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Loved the fact that Allen, as much as he hated his family, did his sister a solid by forcing Jeremy to marry Helena. This book was moving and engaged me throughout. Thank you for a lovely day of reading!
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Yes, I agree about Jeremy. It does give hope of the possibility of redemption for him amd letting go of all the guilt for what he had done since his father truly cares for him.
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Could not put the book down, an amazing story about love and commitment and just the right amount of drama. Can’t wait for more from Lisa!
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It was great Thank you for sharing your gift
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I loved the story although I could do without the intimate bedroom scenes. I wil definately give it good review. It does need a lot of editing.
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I loved the intimate bedroom scenes!!
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Solid storyline and well written
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Great story and characters- but you really need a new editor/proofreader. The misuse of words, grammatical errors and content issues take away from the story! Please do yourself a favor and get a new team. You deferred better.
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I felt the same as Ellen. A few spelling and errors seem to be in every kindle book but there were several in this story. Had to reread several passages. .I enjoyed the story.
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Couldn’t agree with you more. Proof reading is vital.
Thanks dear Carol! I am taking your comments into consideration and have passed them already to my editing team! Thanks for your help!
The most hilarious goof was referring to his “jeans” instead of britches!
Thank you dear Judy, my editing team has changed for the past months and I believe the editing is much better now!
Loved it. Lovely story.
Thank you so much, my dear Joyce!
Awesome story! I liked how throughout the Duke really did not want his wife to suffer even though he felt she betrayed him with her snooping and accusations.
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Enjoyed very much. I just love stories like these. Do agree with the editing issue.
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could not stop reading story. very well written. looking forward to reading more.
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Was a nice story but lacked the depth and spark from your previous books like the dashing widows. I agree with Ellen’s comments.
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I loved the story from start to finish. I guess I read and felt what you wrote instead of checking for grammar etc. I know that is important. Even though some think it wasn’t edited correctly, I don’t think it took anything away from your story. Sorry for any grammatical errors I have made.
Loved it:)
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Unable to put book down
Thank you dear Debbie!😍
Great book. Wonderful storyline.
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A thoroughly enjoyable readfilled with joy love and spicy romance
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Absolutely loved this book. Very well written. Couldn’t put it down. It was quite suspenseful, and couldn’t wait to see what was going to happen. So glad Helena’s brother was caught and punished. Thought Helena and Jeremy were perfect for each other. I was so entranced with them both… Great read! As a retired secretary, I have to agree about the proofreading, however. It was distracting at times.
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Yes, i can not say it better. Those are my thoughts also.
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I have read all your books and enjoyed every one. I like that they are long. That, to me, allows for better storylines and depth of characters. Can’t wait for the next one.
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I enjoyed the story very much. The characters were so believable. I wish the story went on longer. Well written. Going to tell all my friends to make sure to read this book.
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LOVED it great characters, I my thing I thought was a little too much was going to the graves introducing Helena to his parents, saying my mother would sit with you etc.Felt it Was unnecessary. LOVED it as usual.
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I enjoyed the overall story but like others the grammar and poor choice of words etc was distracting. I hope to never have to read the word smirking again!!!!!
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I thoroughly enjoyed this wonderful story! The characters were well thought out, and they were so believable! The brother got his due, and it was a good surprise. I so often can see the end coming, but this time, I didn’t foresee the brother being the villian! At least not in the beginning of the book!! I, too, agree, that the proofreading left alot to be desired, but it didn’t stop me from loving the story!! I was distracting at times, but not enough to stop me from reading it!! l always look forward to reading your works. Thank you for giving us such great reads!!
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I loved the story so much , however you do need a new proofreader.
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Wonderful read!! Enjoyed the characters. Keep up the good work!:))
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Helena’s naivete lasted a long time throughout the story. The errors in spelling were such that no spell checker would find. Seat instead of sit … Unless you were trying to write in Old English.
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Enjoyed this story .I agree with the others on proof readers not doing there job.Otherwise the characters were great.
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Wonderful read, enjoyed the characters
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Needs an editor, poorly phrased sentences.The story was enjoyable.
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wonderful story, Lisa.
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Excellent writing, horrible editing. Great story. Passed a day away reading while looking out upon 3+feet of snow.
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Wonderful book excellent writing. Kept me captivated through the entire story.
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Loved it! It was a wonderfully easy read with humor and sadness but also so much love. You left me with a Cheshire grin at the end of the extended prologue. I too found the incorrect grammar and spelling a distraction from my enjoyment as others have noted. Thank you for another awesome journey!
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Very beautiful and interesting story I enjoy it very much
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Whomever was supposed to edit the book should have been fired. Sentence structure grammar and using words in the wrong way were bit a few of the many mistakes. One Never refers to a Duke as a lord he is always your grace or the duke of whatever. I cringed the whole time I read this please do us all a favor and double check your writing and grammar .
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Exactly!! The daughter of an Earl is not a ‘Miss’, she is referred to as ‘Lady’ …
Thank you so much dear Debbie! This was an older book. I wan to believe that the editing is better in my new books since I have changed my editing team 🙂
This was a good read with very enjoyable moments and characters. Better proofreading is a must so you can maintain your focus on the storyline.
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Enjoyed the story but the word “smirked” was overused and annoying.
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I enjoyed reading this book. The characters were well developed and the plot was well thought out. The only downside was the grammatical errors and misuse of words. I could do a better job of proofreading.
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The grammar and spelling made me miss some of the interaction. It really distracts from a great story. The extended epilogue was better than the first.
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Awesome Book.I Really Enjoyed It.
Thank you dear Linda! 🙂
Thank you for the wonderful story and lovely ending.
Thank you for your sweet words, my dear Joan! The pleasure of making you happy through my stories is insuperable!🙂
I loved the depth of the characters and their interactions, even the evil brother! Better proofing would allow for more fluent reading. I found myself backtracking to check myself.
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Great book. I enjoyed it very much.
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I enjoyed the story very much (in spite of the grammatical errors). I suspected her brother from the beginning with regards to his insistence that Jeremy marry his sister quickly (had the incident been truly known by others, it would have been in the scandal sheets the next day) AND it seemed that the Earl would start to get better while she was still at home but rapidly declined as soon as she moved away!! Great story!!
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So good. I had to keep reading to the end. Wonderful story. Tugged at the heartstrings. Thank you.
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Loved this story. I figured out Allen early in the story. Just knew the father was being poisoned. The love and romance were beyond my imagination. Good work.
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Great story and characters. However I agree with other readers the proofreading needs to be addressed.
Thanks for your comment, dear Nora. I have changed my editing team in my latest books! I hope the proofreading is better now!
Very enjoyable.I liked that there was additional drama with the brother.
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Keep writting – utilizing your talents! A good suport staff is valuable to anyone or any business. One needs to find such and reward them with your appreciation for their work. A word of praise can be equal or greater then a dollar raise. —-OKay, on to reading more of your books…….. thanks
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It was a great story. I love happy couples
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The story was good but the book had the most grammatical errors I have ever seen in a book. You need a new proof reader.
Thanks for your comment, dear Judy! I have changed my editing team since this book’s launch. You won’t find as many mistakes in my latest books!
A very enjoyable story. I didn’t want to put it down.
Thank you, dear Carol! I am glad you like it!
The healing power of love allows Jeremy to embrace love and fulfill Helena’s dreams. (Must agree with criticisms of editing, but glad to note you have replaced that team.)
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I agree with Ellen. Too many typos. Also an Earls daughter is referred to as Lady not miss. Viscount and a Barons daughters are referred to as miss and sons Mr.
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Great read!
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Very enjoyable reading. Some love and suspense.
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What a lovely story. Characters were so lovely. Knew that there was something quite right about Allan. Lovely end ing.
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I really enjoyed this book and the characters. The EE was good but somehow I feel it was missing a true ending. There will be no sequel that I can see so why not extend to let us know if baby is girl or boy, also if her Dad fully recovers just felt like that was all put to the side once you find out he was poisoned. The proof reading does need improvement.
Thank you, dear Mary, for your feedback! You help me write better stories in the future. As for the proofreading, my editing team and I will look into it.
Absolutely loved this book. Very well written. Couldn’t put it down. It was quite suspenseful, and couldn’t wait to see what was going to happen. So glad Helena’s brother was caught and punished. Thought Helena and Jeremy were perfect for each other. I was so entranced with them both… Great read! As a retired administrative assistant, I have to agree about the need for proofreading, however. It was distracting at times.
Thank you so much for your feedback, my dear! I’m glad you enjoyed the story even with the typos.
I really enjoyed reading this book
I am very happy you liked it, my dear!
Great read…. It started as mutual attraction… Then some tensions… N finally they got their happy ever after…. Jeremy was so loving n caring…. Loved his character…. Helenas was also good but she was some what wateringpot… N I had doubt about Allan from when he can in to helenas family…seemed suspicious from start…. Over all great read… Was unable to keep down… Finished it in onego… Heart touching story…
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I’ve read many of the reviews and glad that I’m not alone in the editing and grammar. I did enjoy the story immensely and the characters. I knew almost from the beginning that the brother pushing for the marriage was going to be the villain, just didn’t think he would be willing to commit patricide.
Hello my dear Phyllis, I am really glad you enjoyed the story! I will let my team know about the grammar and editing problems in the book!
I agree with most of the comments regarding the proofreading. It is quite distracting. I did enjoy the story very much.
Hello my dear Pam! I am happy you enjoyed the book! I really appreciate your feedback and I will let my team know!
A moving story. Allan horrible action can be justified but his feeling of hurt maybe understood giving the way sociatybreacted to those who broke their unwritten rules. It must be said the same about Jeremy feeling toward her mother and women in general, his fears of trust and freely love again. Helena’s uncertainty about Jeremy and their future together arouse from the unconventional way the came to be a couple. Thankfully, at the end all was well and they have the happy ever after.
I would recommend more careful editing not only for spellig but some phrases were incomplete and deterred the flow of the reading.
Hello my dear Mercedes! Thank you for your comment, I am really glad you enjoyed the story. I will definitely discuss your feedback with my team. Thank you for bringing such matters to my attention!
Great story. Really enjoyed it
Hello my dear Dave! I am really glad you enjoyed the story! As a writer this is my highest reward!
I really enjoyed this book. Good story line & it wasn’t dragged out. Some books I read do get dragged out & it make you want to say ‘just get on with it’. Well done. Eleanor
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The Duke and Helena had quite the journey to their love story and HEA. Enjoyable.
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I was thoroughly enthralled with this story!it’s
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Great story. Horrible editor
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Loved the story but hard to figure out what you mean sometimes, need a good proofreader!!!
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Very good story. Well written it keeps you wanting more. I enjoyed it very much.
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I love your books!!!
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I have to agree with the others as far as the technicalities of the typing are concerned. They are in every book and very distracting from the wonderful works you have written! As a transcriber myself and retired educator, I keep wanting to correct it all☺️
Hello my dear Janet, thank you for the feedback, I promise to work on it with my team!
Needs proofreading before publishing
I will definitely discuss it with my team, thank you for bringing it to my attention!
The wording is bad, wrong tense of many words, wrong word used, titled instead of tilted, sort instead of sought, phantom instead of fathom. Pronouns are mixed and way too much time is spent on every detail of sexual contact. I will definitely be looking for another author.
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This work isn’t up to your usual high standards. There was terrible misuse of grammar. The phrasing was ruined by the multiple misuse of word tenses and meaning. Was this ever even proof-read? There were so many misstatements, wrong use of words and misspellings and grammatical errors that it seriously detracted from the plot. Please always read through your finished novels and have it proof-read by a professional.
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Excellent
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The story had everything you could want, intrigue, sadness, betrayal and most of all Love ❤️
oh dear, you’ll make me cry! 💖
An absolutely fantastic story, with so many different aspects to it that you were whirling around with emotion. I loved it. I hope you do too.
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